1) White text on brown background is very difficult to read for many people.
2) Horizontal scrolling is bad.
3) The main headline is far too big. You should be able to take in a headline in a single glance.
4) The placement of the gigantic green button seems somewhat arbitrary. In general, those buttons always look as if they've been designed for a baby toy.
5) I'm forced to create an account to read a sample.
6) The "written about by" references are not clickable.
The general impression is that the site looks cluttered, trying to spread out a modest amount of actual information over as large an area as possible.
1) White text on brown background is very difficult to read for many people.
2) Horizontal scrolling is bad.
3) The main headline is far too big. You should be able to take in a headline in a single glance.
4) The placement of the gigantic green button seems somewhat arbitrary. In general, those buttons always look as if they've been designed for a baby toy.
5) I'm forced to create an account to read a sample.
6) The "written about by" references are not clickable.
The general impression is that the site looks cluttered, trying to spread out a modest amount of actual information over as large an area as possible.